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Dear Mary Chen Date:2008.12.23 Tomorrow,I will go to beijing for working a week,so Iam sorry that I cannot discuss about holding the new year party with everyone,please to tell everyone to decide on the date and place we will hold at the end,and please to prepare all we need. Dear liming