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Send to:Mr. Johnson, Mail address:sales-department@hotmail.com Dear Mr Haiyang, I have got the 3000 products from your company in 22.DEC,but according to the signing of NO.35 order,the number of products are 3500,we have not got the others 500 products during now,please check your product list as soon as possible,and we are looking forward to your early reply.Thanks!