2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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If a foreign friend is going to visit my hometown,I will lead him to visit some place that are represent our culture.Because I think sightseeing is common wherever you are. So I like to introduce our culture by visiting the culture sightseeing. In my hometown,there are so many places valued to visit.Fisit,I will take my friend to YUWANG hill that have kinds of trees look beautiful.Next,the QINGSHUI river is our aim.We will see fresh water and play with the fish.Finally,we will go to BIGAN temple which is used to remember our great man whose name is BIGAN. This is my route to have a travail with my foreign friend.It must be very meaningful.