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As the famous saying goes, Happiness is not the absence of problems, but the ability to dal with them. From which we can draw a conclusion that we will very happy i wedeal with the problem we meet in our liffe and improve our abilities. No garden is without weeds. Our life can't be developed successively. But what we can do to make our life more efficient is that we can improve our abilities which can help us to deal with the problem we meet. In order to develop our ability, what we can do are as follows. Fristly, we should read more books to increase our knowledges. Secondly, we should take an active part in our life and we will reduculate more experience. Last but not least, we should learn to our teachers, friends, parents and so on.Only in this way can we have more ways to learn the abilities that we can deal with the problems. As far as I'm concerned, if we have sufficient ability in our life, we will be more happily when we take the abilities to deal with them.
