2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

拼写很棒，可适当增加学术词汇的使用；文章在句法方面做的很棒，从句和复杂句的使用不错；全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。

Word I Will Never Forget It is said that “failure is the mother of success,you should never give in failure ”,which every time I failed ,my English teacher was encouraging me with this sentence.However ,in my mind,being confident is another major factor to help you keep on.Therefore confidence is the word I will never forget. Firstly , the word gives me the courage to do things difficult. But to be honest , I was a shy and quiet boy, of course a little cowardice . I did not like to try things because I was afraid to be failed . Although I was too worried to try something ,I also was a lucky dog. My English teacher , a beautiful and patient woman, made an overall comment on me. She did not think I was a useless boy even though my response was always passive . She told me that I should believe in myself and become more confident, which I would get over varieties of troubles.After that , I made my efforts to do everything conscious with confidence . All in all , the word “confidence”which made a great difference to my life I will never forget. One person can not be successful without confidence.