2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

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How College Students Spend Their Leisure time Nowadays, there is a lot of leisure time for college students.Therefore, how students in university spend their leisure time is an significant problem.And i think there are many meaningful things to do after study work. On one hand , i think we should participate in some organizes such as student union, which can not only exercise our capacity but also experience the delights from diverse activities. Moreover ,it is also a good chance for you to make lots of friends,which make you become more outgoing .Of course ,you can also choose to take a part-time job. It is widely know that we can earn some money to ease their parents' burden.What s more ,taking a part time is an effective approach for us to get better understand about society. On the other hand ,you can make use of your library.College libraries are more than just a roomful of books. There, you can find academic periodicals that won't appear in any bookstore and get free access to special databases that you'd have to pay to use otherwise.so you can spend your leisure time to read verities of books in the library ,which can expend your eyes. In a word, college life is very interesting.of course it is also limited and you should make plans how to make use of your time in university.So take an action and cherish every minute.Refusing yourselves to waste time do things which make your life meaningful.We should do even more significant.