2013-2014年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(31):助人为乐

可适当增加从句的使用；文中基本没有过渡词和衔接词，建议增加衔接词汇的积累；作者能较熟练地使用丰富的词汇，但请加强单词拼写的检查；请注意分段；连词使用偏少。

Everyday something is hapenning around eveybody .But I have never forgotten a special memory in my mind. That was a summer. I was only a nine-year-old girl.I was having a walk near the lake .And suddenly there was a women falling off the bridge and dropped into the lake.Lots of people stood on the bridge and talked aboout it.But nobody wanted to give their hands.Just a minutes later,a young boy about ninteen years old