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高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

发布时间:2013-05-16 16:20浏览次数:22875
要求:
某英文杂志新设“我的家乡”专栏向读者征文,请按下面提供的要点写一篇100个词左右的短文,介绍你的家乡过去的情况和现在的变化,向该杂志投稿。短文标题已给出。
过去:家乡小镇绿树环抱;小河清清鱼儿嬉戏;房屋简陋 街道狭窄;人们劳作生活清贫;现在:高楼大厦厂店林立;大小车辆驰骋街头;工业发展环境恶化;树木减少鱼儿消失;治理污染当务之急。
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文章组织结构良好;注意下文中出现的句法错误;请作者加强词汇表达的灵活性,但文中有较多拼写错误;请注意分段;连词使用偏少。

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My Hometown My hometown is located in the southeast of hubei province, and it is a beautiful twon. iIn the past, the envirvoment is better,the villeage was surroudded by mountians and the river was very clearn,we could see the fish playing water, people lived there worked in the land by their hands,they woked very hard but the gain is very poor. According to the development of the techollogy,our hometown is changed a lot, now we can see the building everywhere, there are a lots of cars drive in roads.but one coin always has two sides,the environment is polluted worse and worse,the trees are reducing and the finshes are disappearing,so the most important things we should pay attention is the pollution

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