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My Hometown My hometown is located in the southeast of hubei province, and it is a beautiful twon. iIn the past, the envirvoment is better,the villeage was surroudded by mountians and the river was very clearn,we could see the fish playing water, people lived there worked in the land by their hands,they woked very hard but the gain is very poor. According to the development of the techollogy,our hometown is changed a lot, now we can see the building everywhere, there are a lots of cars drive in roads.but one coin always has two sides,the environment is polluted worse and worse,the trees are reducing and the finshes are disappearing,so the most important things we should pay attention is the pollution