高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

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My Hometown My hometown is located in the southeast of hubei province, and it is a beautiful town. In the past,because the enviroment is better,so the village was surrouded by mountains and the river was very clean.We could see the fish playing in water.People were woke in land ,although they woked very hard but the gain was very poor. According to the development of the technology,our hometown was changed a lot,now,we can see the buildings everywhere,and there are lots of cars on road. But one coin always has two sides,because of the environment is polluted worse and worse, the trees are reducing and the finshes are disappearing, so the most important things we should pay attention for the pollution