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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第2套):鸡蛋放到一个篮子

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:11浏览次数:10394
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题目:It is unwise to put all eggs in one basket.把全部鸡蛋放到一个篮子里是不明智的。
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I belive most people would agree the point that it is unwise to pull all eggs in one basket. The first reason is if we put all the passion on one thing,we must put all the wish on it,and hope it's will succeese,but it only our wish,every possioble will current,we can't make sure it's must succeese,and when it failed,we have no idea to face the failed,because we put too much on it,maybe it will change our life that we can never cherish anymore. The second reason,we put our passion on diffrent things,maybe one,two or more,if we failed on one thing,we will have another thing to cherish us up,and we will have motivation to fighting for another thing,at least ,we still have a wish for life. To sum up,it is unwise put all eggs in one basket,we should put it in two or more basket to decent the dangerous,and we will have more possible to get succeed.

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