2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第1套):The most interesting place

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My dear friend,if you come to visit China,I would show you the place where I adore.It is my lovely hometown--chaoshan area. As far as I'm concerned,it is such a fantastic place that you would have a crush on it.To begin with,the delicious food will attract you,such as changfen,spring rolls,the oyster and so on.Not only can you taste varieties of yummy food,but also you can make the Tao Kang with us which must be an unforgettable experience for you.Further,there are many interesting spots where are full of chaoshan humanities.Han Gong Temple is known for the famous poet Hanyu in Tang dynasty.Besides,Xianzi Bridge,Jieyang Building Square are also worthy of having a visit.Eventually,I will make you a ckkup of chaoshan kongfu Tea as well as take you to see chaoshan Opera which is well-known around the world. Do you think my hometown is lovely and attractive?It is the best place you should come and you would fall in love with it.