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the most forgettable thing there are many forgettable things occurred in my life since i could remember things. however ,one of the deepest things still stand in my brand clearly even though it is happened twelve years ago. when i was ten yeas i got an illness that nearly could not be completely curable.so i am very appreciated that my dear parents did not give up me and made their efforts to save my life .on one day morning i was twelve years ,my mother had to take me to the Hangzhou province in order to get better doctors for me but it is unfortunately that we are strange about the city,of course my father did not accompany with us for he had to work hard to support our family i clearly remembered that i did not have breakfast as well my mom . because we had to save our time ,i was so hungry that i cried, my mom comfort me that she would buy food when arrived in Hangzhou .however ,when reached that city my mom almost did not know where to go next step with helpless i would like to add a little that my mom is shy and faint-hearted. Although i was only twelve years old at that time but i knew the way that i could ask police for help then i began to look for police luckily i found one and required him that where was the hospital and how to go there ?finally thanks to the police’s assistant we founded the hospital and saw a doctor. Actually to my mind my mom’s love and the police’s kind heart made me moved and forgettable i always remind myself that i should love my parents and keep heliping other without return.
