Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
文中词汇表达贫乏,但是单词拼写做的不错;文中应增加从句和复合句的使用;有效地使用了语句间的衔接成分;请注意分段。
From this tatus,we can see that the education does matter to the wage.And in general,the higher education you get,the more money you earn.but it does not mean that we can't get the higher pay if we don't get the better education.Some people who get the less than high school work hard and also can get the high pay.But other people do not get so much wage,even if they get the higher education,there are some excuses.And one of the reasons is that they don't really get the knowledge of the main subject,and they are not working hard.