2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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canada is a beatiful country. the weather is fine.the climate is pleasant.i came to canada in2008.when i took off the plane. i first saw the blue sky. white cloud.and a lot of flowers. i love this country at once. i made up a desition .i want to stay here.i will studay english very hard . then i will find a jop. i hope my father and my mother can come here too. i will do it i must do my best.