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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
句式变化较为明显，句法基础不错；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用；希望学术词汇的使用能更熟练一些，还要加强单词拼写的检查；请注意分段。
communicate on the internet with the computer spread all over the world,more and more people use internet to do their things. for exmple, teacher and students complete the teaching and learning on the internet ,the people who have a long distance can make a commenication immeditely. however ,everything has two sides,it is the same with the internet commenication. internet commenication can sperd all over the world ,when you talk with someone ,you may unknow where is him form .besides,on one can ensure the information he communicate with net friend is true.if you not protect yousrlf well,you may be hurt. so i think we should make face to face communicate more than internet communicate .
