可适当增加长句和复杂句的使用;作者在学术词汇方面要多下功夫,有些单词拼错了;上下文衔接不流畅,文章结构不严谨。
Importantce of thinking again Rcently.there is a sort of phenomenon that amounts of people believe it is wise of drawing a conclusion right now when they see and hear somethings.however,this point just is my opponent.That is to say ,it is of great signifcance for us to think again when something occur. Nowdays.the number of computer user is inscreasing growing,as for youngsers particularly,so few of informatoin online have an bad influence on who insists on what they hear or see are right.In fact ,they are tempted by these surface cases and find it difficult to look the true insuation clearly.Moreover,many people over believe in themselves .They feel it is reasonable in first insight of sometings. Acoording to these problems,two tips,I think, can be put into effect.First one,we form a habit of distingusing between right and wrong.Another one,thinking more is a efficient solusion to avoid making mistakes.If people do the two tips,I believe,they will performance well in the future.
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