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新东方托福高分作文:应该独自作出决定吗?

发布时间:2013-08-05 17:39浏览次数:600
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题目要求:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? A person should never make an important decision alone. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

题目分析:

不能同意这个观点。Never是绝对修饰词。确实,很多的时候独自做出的决定是错误的。因为做出正确的决定需要完整的信息。然而,也有些时候必须独自做出决定。比如,战场上的指挥官。并且,很多独自做出的决定并不是错误的。所以,只能说one can not be more careful to make an important decision。
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拼写做的很棒,学术词汇可适量增加;文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒;可适当增加几条从句。

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There is a common fact that our life is full of choices such as what for dinner today or which occupation you prefer and so forth.Therefore we need to learn how to make the right and wise decisions for our better future. First off all,some people believe that a person should never make an important decision alone because we may make the mistake sometime especially when we in front of a big choice which could influence us dramatically.On the degree,I agree that we'd better discuss the big issue with our family or friends before the decision.But we need to be independent sometime.For instance,when we are grown up and far away from our family we have to decide it by ourselves.What's more,it is better for you to make up your mind alone when you shopping because the assistants always urge consumers buy something they don't really need. Above all mentioned,making a decision alone or acquiring some suggestions from your close partners is depending on the condition.

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