文中衔接词丰富;作者词汇表达不够灵活,但有些单词拼错了;采用了一些简单的从句;请注意分段。
It is not brillient to get the conclude as soon as seeing something or listening it .When we faced to something,the first reflect should be thinking one's own .Everything has two sides just like swords.Maybe what you saw or listened is contray to what it really was . Or somebody saw it and thought by his side and opinion,so the information may be changed from his mouth.
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