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It is not brilliant to get the result as soon as seeing something or listening to it.When we faced to something,the first reflect should be thinking one's own .Everything has two sides just like swords.Maybe what you saw or listened is contray to what it really was . Or somebody saw it and thought by his side and opinion,so the information may be changed from his mouth.
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