可适当增加长句和复杂句的使用;文中衔接词丰富;文中词汇表达不够丰富,学术词汇方面要多累积;请注意分段。
It is not brilliant to get the result as soon as seeing something or hearing to it.When we faced something,the first time should be thinking one's own.Everything has two sides just like swords.Maybe what you saw or listened is contray to what it really was . Or somebody saw it and thought by his side and opinion,so the information may be changed from his mouth.
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