希望作者可以加强词汇表达多样性,尤其是学术词汇的积累;可适当增加长句和复杂句的使用;全文结构较为严谨;请注意分段。
It is not brilliant to get the result as soon as seeing something or hearing to it.When we confronted something,the first time should be thinking one's own.Everything has two sides just like swords.Maybe what you saw or heard is on the contrary with what it really was . Or somebody saw it and thought by his side and opinion,so the information may be changed from his mouth.
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