作者词汇表达较为熟练,学术词汇使用不是很多;可适当增加长句和复杂句的使用;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨;请注意分段。
It is not brilliant to get the result as soon as seeing something or hearing to it.When we confronted with something,the first time should be thinking one's own.Everything has two sides just like swords.Maybe what you saw or heard is on the contrary with what it really was. Or somebody saw it and thought by his side and opinion,so the information may be changed from his mouth.
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