GRE写作Issue模拟题:The Importance of Science and Art

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How do you think about the importance of the art and the science? Do you think the science is more important than the art? Some people believe the science reassures us more than the art. There is undeniable that the science is very important and worthwhile for humans. No one can doubt that the value with which the technology works out. And it the great change will take place for the small progress in science such as the economy, the production and the quality of people’s live. Because of the invitation of the transport, not only is the time we spend in going somewhere shorten but also are we more enjoyable in outgoing. And the connection among people who are all over the world gets closer, further, we are more convenient to do business but not because the distance is too far to give up, which lead to the rapidly developed economy. What’s more, the productive fore is more and more progressive because of the advanced technology, which decrease the problem about hungry. However, a lot of problems which are upset come up with while we are falling with the advantages from the developed science. For example, a lot of populations which are so harmful that will danger our health such as the sandstorm, the acid rain and the water population discovering gradually. So far as that the science doesn’t reassure us but makes us terrified. And let’s turn to the art, which seems like unhelpful for human but still is regarded by us. A lot of people who haven’t entertainment in art think that the art is just the luxury of our lives and it only cost us a lot of money but can’t work out with anything. It seems the idea above is true, but actually, I don’t think so. Even though it seems that the art is not connected with our lives and not only does it cost us a lot of money but also does it take us too much time, besides, we get nothing from it. Nether less, the life-step nowadays is so fast that we need something lead to our mind in tranquility, exactly, the art is a good way for us to calm down. We can forget some troubles that we face during admiring the art. In other word, not only the life of us but also the history can be recorded with the art. Isn’t it very meaningful for us to appreciate the art. In a conclusion, on the one hand both science and art make us reassured, on the other hand, we will be upset with them sometimes. So it’s erroneous for every one of us to judge the functions of science or the importance of art just with the personal thought.