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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第3套):网络沟通

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:41浏览次数:12929
要求:

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.


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有效地采用了多种衔接方法,层次清晰;复杂句采用很棒;拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;请注意分段。

用户练习作文:

Now,In the world,Internet has become a major way of communication,Many people chat online can break the space limited,It can make sure that people can chatting everywhere or whenever.With the development of the technology,We can communicate not only by the voice but also by the vidio,But can replace face-to-face contact?The answer is no,In the life,People contact not only through language but also body language,We will hold one's hand,Look at their eyes when talking.Talking face-to-face is more emotional than chat online,So electronic communication can't replace face-to-face contact forever!

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