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作者词汇基础扎实，拼写也很棒；作者有一定功底，可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆；过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错。
College is a place where people can acquire the essence of human’s wisdom and knowledge. Nowadays, the increasing amount of people especially the young are willing to attend college. Various reasons can be traced, such as to enlarge the knowledge, to fulfill the parent’s wish, or even to make full preparations for their career goal. First of all, the most important and widely accepted reason must been the pursuit of knowledge. Looking the professors or scholars in universities today, it is no doubt to find that a majority of these groups owns the unlimited enthusiasm of research with their great devotion. No wonder plenty of young students are attracted to join this line. This reservoir of art, science, and engineering definitely imparts expertise or knowledge to the students in order to help them build a clear framework in a particular field. What’s more, studying in college is not just the dream of teenagers, but also of their parents. In China and other developing countries, in particular, the education sources are not attributed equally among the regions. Thus, a high-level education sometimes may be inaccessible to the poor families, though in recent years, the rate of entrance of university has on its rise. Besides, for those raised in a family without literacy, college experience and the diploma will lead them to a more promising future. Last but not least, everyone is responsible for the development of society through his occupation. As we all know, one’s career promotion is closely bonded with his expertise skill and abilities of communication and etc. Learning in the college actually enhances those abilities and skills for young adults, which build a concrete cornerstone for one’s personal development in his life. Take my university as an example, the graduates form college are obviously more competitive than those who owns no college diploma. Thus, most of the graduates form universities finally got satisfactory job when they enter the society. At the same time, people with sophisticated ability in different fields can utilize their wisdom and make contributions to the whole world. All in all, college means an experience, means knowledge, also means a bright future for young people. No one is willing to become the victims of illiteracy in this information time.
