作者词汇表达较丰富准确,不过学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间;有效的运用了一些复杂句;上下文衔接稍显不流畅。
Recently,should one expect a reward when doing a good deed has aroused a heated debate.Some people think that those who helped others should get something in return,they hold this opinion because they believed that give a reward can encourage him to do better.Others individuals,however,take the attitude that should not pay a reward.They think that has in line without the standard of moral.From my perspective,i give my vote to the former. The main reasons are listed as follows.To start with,if someone do a good deed,it reflects a character's comprehensive quality,we entail give him a praise and approve for his spirit,that's not just a respect,but more of something that encourage to his personality.What's more,only in this way to give some back can drive more people to do their umost to help others. As far as i concerned,more attention should paid to give a reward.