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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第1套):网络教育

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:37浏览次数:9038
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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the internet on learning and then explain why education doesn't simply mean learning to obtain information. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

用户的作文(系统评分71.0分
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拼写很棒,可适当增加学术词汇的使用;采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;有效的运用了一些复杂句;请注意分段。

用户练习作文:

Internet is become a part of our life,We can learn knowledge on the internet,In addition,Many knowledge comes from internet are't including in the books.today,If you ask a question on the internet,many people can help you to answer it.So it is powerful.But not all the information came from internet is useful,Some information is sex or unhealthy,While children contact this content,Because they are too young so that can't control themself to against it.So how to use computer for learning,The answer is should be leaded by right way.

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