单词拼写做的不错,文中词汇表达贫乏;正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;文章上下文衔接不是很紧凑,结构缺少组织;连词使用偏少。
my good friend is my classmate. her name is lucy. she is nine years old. she is grade 2 class four. she is wearing a blue dress and white shoes. her hair is black . we often play together. we like play badminton . we think that sports is good at our health.