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To what extent do you agree or disagree?
注意：这道题不要泛泛地写媒体的优劣势，而应集中在influence what people think is important.
提纲：
Negative:Manipulation of the mass in politics, consumption, value change
positive:1.Call for national action for public interest 2.Promote awareness of some important issues
作者学术词汇使用比较准确，文中有较多拼写错误；作者有一定功底，可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用。
Nowadays, advertising seems always be with us in daily life, which can be found on roads when you are waiting for a bus , or can fly to you when you open an website. Believe it or not, advertising indeed affect our life and our thinking. Therefore, its influence on us cannot be neglected. Some say that it has more negative aspects than positive ones, whilst i would like to be on the side of the opponents who agree that it comes with more upsides. More than decorating our cities, advertising affect our mind from two main aspects. Firstly, advertising is a necessary way to spread information among us. For instance, politicians use it to release their important information, such as elections and future developing planes. Meanwhile, it is also an essential method to increase environmental-friendly awareness by showing dates and pictures. Secondly, some organisations use the advertising to change our mind. For example, the merchandisers could apply adversiting to promote their goods. One of current example is the release of iphone6 and 6 plus, which indeed leads to a great amount individuals lining outside of the app stores so early. Further, it has an profound impact on our culture by affecting children from early age, like the KFC, which has changed some local diet culture to some extent, especially, Asian diet culture. Hence, as an crutial method to delieve information, advertising has an important role in our life. However, it also come with drawbacks. For starters, it could transfer unhealthy life style, like the fast food advertisement. One of the successful company is the KFC, which is popular among children who are the future of the world. Moreover, it is considered to a method to control the public by some evil politicians, which could push their citizens to hell, like some Islam countries. As for the demerits it comes with, the government could do more strict censerships to reduce the effects. To sum up, advertising as an essential medium has an effective role in widespreading information, from which we could know more about our countries and caring more our earth, and changing our thinking, which could further affect our culture. For the negative aspects, cencership is necessary.
