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It is not difficult for us to find that there are so many products on excessive packaging not only in the market but online store,which covers a fake information on it and fools the customer.therefore,I can not help asking myself what is wrong with the businessmen? From where I stand,I hold the view that the one of its important reason is the wide-scale use of media such as the television and the computer,which makes customers more convenient to buy products,which also creats an opportunity for businessmen to package excessive with no restraints.In addition to this,what is the crucial factor is the lack of the virture of honest in the society.People take the virtue of honest for granted but only to make fortune blindly,so that businessmen make mass excessive packaging products to cheat their customers.The last reason is that people living in modern society are obsessive to the perfect. I think the approches to solve this phonomena lie in the establish of the virtue of honest.Only by this way can businessmen make sell real products not make excessive packaging to cheat customers.And people should hold a attitude that there is no perfect goods in the world.
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