过渡词很丰富,衔接词同时使用的恰到好处;有效的运用了一些复杂句;文中词汇多样性稍有欠缺,单词拼写也要更仔细。
Every day, we may hear someone’s opinions for something or someone no metter where we are and when we are .If it is about us or we are interesting we will chat with others,and make a conclusion for them. Howerer ,we would like to make a conclusion as soon as posible,which is not a smart behavior . As we know, it is not the truth sometimes when hearing it,on the controry, it mays make a hurt to someone or surveys some wrong message to others. So it is intellegent to talk your opinon without the trice thinking.
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