过渡词很丰富,衔接词同时使用的恰到好处;文中一些从句的使用为文章增色;文中词汇多样性稍有欠缺,单词拼写也要更仔细。
Every day, we may hear someone’s opinions for something or someone no matter where we are and when we are .If it is about us or we are interesting in it, we will chat with others,and make a conclusion for them. Howerer ,we would like to make a conclusion as soon as posible,which is not a smart behavior . As we know, it is not the truth sometimes when hearing it,on the controry, it mays make a hurt to someone or surveys some wrong words to others. So it is intellegent to talk your opinon without the trice thinking.
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