2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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dear , welcome to my hometown and i am very happy because l will tell you some things. there are a lot of beatifui places,for instance,lingquan taple . my hometown is arounded in a river.we can go to swim. at the same time,we can go shop. in a word,my hometown is so well.