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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

发布时间:2013-08-19 17:06浏览次数:17596
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

Snap judgments can never be trusted.

Use reasons and examples to support your opinion.

草率的判断不可信。你同意这种说法吗?给出原因和例子。

字数要求:300字以内。

用户的作文(系统评分73.5分
评语:

文中词汇表达较丰富恰当,但学术词汇稍显不足;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;文章层次较为清晰;请注意分段;请提高文章内敛性,段落和句子要围绕主题展开。

用户练习作文:

They say,snap judgements can never be trusted.I don't think so.The reasons are as follows.For one thing,the snap judgements coming from the smart minds are mostly right because they can make judgement quickly and correctly.Take an old chinese story for instance,Simaguang,an famous ancient man in china,once he lifted the stone very high and threw it towards the vat in which a young boy was nearly drowning.There is no much time for you to think again and again to get an perfect solution in emergency.The only thing you can rely on is your experiences. For another thing, sometimes you need to make decision intuitively rather than rationally.We always hear that the judgement from woman's intuition is always correct.So sometimes we can trust snap judgements.

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