雅思写作范文:出国旅游的利弊

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Today, many people choose to travel overseas because the cost of air tickets is getting cheaper. Some people think to travel to other courtries can bring them totally different experience by comparing with local tours. But others argue that excessive travelling aboard does not any help on promoting our country's economy. Admittedly, becasue of the globalisation and fierce competition among air companies, we have been benefiting from the outcome of lower air cost. And more countries are friendly open to tourists, especially to Chinese, and to gain visa is also so easy now. These factors provide the conveniency for people to travel aboard . The advantages are apparent. By travelling to other countries, people are able to appreciate very different scenaries from that of their own country, such as European countries with different architectural styles, Brazil with tropic rainforest, etc. And tourists can try different cuisine aboard as well. And one more point which is so important, people can get more aware about the culture from different countries which you couldn't get so real by sitting in front of a TV. However, those people who hold negative idea about overseas travelling insist that it won't contribute to their own country. Even though travelling to other countries might have some drawbacks, for example, taking air plane lead to lots of energy consumption and air pollution, I think if people choose domestic tours, the pheomenon still exists. And some opponent also argue that tourists are consuming more imported products instead of local products which hurts local economy, to this, I am still doulted because I think it can stimulate local products to be updated and innovated. In conclusion, overseas travelling enable citizens to have good understanding to the world, and people can learn lots of postive practice by experiencing different visional joy, customs and foods. All in all, advantages are much more than disadvantages.