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作者词汇量积累不错，学术词汇积累较少；可适当增加从句的使用；过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错。
I am an ordinary girl who is not really smart and pretty but warm-hearted. I’m not tall but a little short, little lower height is one of the worrisome of mine, however, even though I do exercise every day, the height has never changed. So I don’t concentrate too much time on it until I learn that maybe I will not become taller. Nether less I don't pay much attention to my height, the sports that I like doing never be broken off. By the way, I also a girl who has manful interest include climbing the mountains, playing badminton, reading books and listening to the music. And almost of a lot of hobbies of mine, listening to the music is my favorite. And I will tell you the reason why I love it so much under the sentences. Listening to the music is an interest of which I think not only can it help us enjoy ourselves but also can it calm us down. For example, HEARTBEATS is one of the songs that I enjoy, the beautiful voice and the appropriate lyrics always make me abandon myself and get rid of the problems those I am in the face of. Another song of my favorite is which named I believe, which cheers me up when I am reaching the depth of despair in life because of the excited lyrics. I enjoy reading during my leisure time which opens my eyes and helps me to learn a lot of knowledge which has a lifelong benefit. Besides, I am more and more optimistic because I realized that there are equally a lot of people who suffered from disasters but live with determinations. On weekends, I prefer to climb the mountains with my friends. Although it’s very tired during the climbing, we enjoy the fresh air and are closer to nature when we arrive at the top of the mountain. Thanks to my hobbies, I grow up with strong determination and health. And because of the determination, I am able to overcome some shortcomings and make steady progress on my career.
