高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

在平时练习中应增加词汇量的积累；建议增加衔接词和过渡词的使用；词汇表达丰富度要注意，不过单词拼写错误较多；请注意分段；连词使用偏少。

Our hometown used to be green and surrouded by trees.Fishes swimmed in the small river freely.Houses were old and bad with narrarow strees.Compared with passed,we can obviouly feel that the changing from decade years ago.Skyscarpers stands on the ground,stores are like something after rains.Nearly all of the streets are covered by the vehicles.The enviorment diverstrated by the industry develpping.Reduction of trees,disapparing fishes,make the people life coming to no more healty.