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新东方托福高分作文:应该从外在判断一个人吗?

发布时间:2013-08-05 17:36浏览次数:2933
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题目要求:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? One should never judge a person by external appearances. Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

题目分析:

表明只能“部分同意”的立场。然后写两大段,举若干个例子。很多的情况下,确实不应该根据外表判断一个人。但也有一些情况下,必须根据外表判断。比如,导演选择演员;招聘零售柜台店员等等。
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评语:

作者能较灵活地使用词汇表达,但学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间;错误句子很少,但从句使用不熟练;全文结构较为严谨;请提高文章内敛性,段落和句子要围绕主题展开;副词使用偏多。

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There is a old saying that'One should never judge a person by external appearances'.On the one hand,I can't agree with it anymore that we should never judge a person only by external appearances.On the other hand sometime the appearances is one of the most important factors to be considered when you choose some actors or shop assistants. First of all,in our daily life we won't judge someone only by external appearances.For instance,when we choose some significant one,close friends or love partner,in our life we never judge them by external appearances.Of course,their characters,habits and interests are much more important than external appearances. In my opinion,I hold that one should never judge a person only by external appearances.

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