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字数：300 满分：100分
单词拼写很棒，可考虑增加学术词汇的使用量；句式变化较为明显，句法基础不错；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用。
As is known to us all,since we human beings came into existence on earth,money has played an important role in our life.Nowadays,comptitions in society are becoming increasingly cruel and making money has become a problem for almost everyone.In our daily life,trying to be a smart consumer will surely do good to our living standard and we have to save money from the smallest things.My opinions are as follows. In the first place,to be a smart consumer,we have to pay more attention to minimising the waste,for example collecting coupons,looking for group-buy deals and buy clothes when in a sale.To some degree,I think these small things can help to save money.Besides,doing something small before doing something big is an correct idea.If you cannot keep your own room clean,how you can clean the whole world.So we cannot always dream about making more and more money,we have to save money.In contrast,we also cannot be too mean.Saving money doesn't mean spending as less money as possible.For example,only buying clothes when in a sale is not a good way.If you really need a coat or something else,you go and buy it,and that is not so called waste. As far as I am concerned,there is no denying that everyone need to be careful about our money.Saving money is a good habit which is worth developing.All in all,spending money when you are really in need,and that proves you a smart consumer.
