2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):手机

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In our daily life,the cell phone plays an very important role.Not only the kids use it,but also adults.What if there are not phones,what could our life becomes.I think this is a important problem that we should think about it carefully. By the mobiles' appears,it makes our life more convenient.We could use it contacting family and friends;we could use it surfing on the internet;we could also use it shopping on the net.In a word,we could do everything by using the phones.But who ever think about the phone's disadvantages,it is harmful for our body health;it has so much radiation;it is detrimental to the pregnant women.And because of mobiles,people become dependent on it.They think it will give them a kind of sense of security.Course sometime they use it to paint their defects and mistakes.So I think people should reduce the cell phones' use,they should do things by themselves.