2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):手机

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In our daily life,the cell phone plays an important role.Not only the kids use it,but also adults.What if there are not phones,what could our life becomes.I think this is an important problem that we should think about it carefully. By the mobiles' appears,it makes our life more convenient.We could keep in contact family and friends by phones;we could use it surfing on the internet;we could also use it shopping on the net.In a word,we could do everything by using the phones.But who ever think about the phone's disadvantages,it is harmful to our body health;it has so much radiation;it is detrimental to the pregnant women.And because of mobiles,people become dependent on it.They think it will give them a kind of sense of security.Course sometime they use it to paint their defects and mistakes.So I think people should reduce the cell phones' use,they should do things by themselves.