高一英语作文模拟题:我最喜欢的运动

单词拼写做的不错，文中词汇表达贫乏；加强长句的练习，会取得更不错的成绩；过渡词和衔接词使用欠丰富，层次欠清晰；请注意分段；连词使用偏少。

Playing football is my favorite sport. I like playing football by chance. I picked a football on my way home. And than I played with my friends. After that I deeply like playing football. I often train and have a race with my classmates. Beckham is my favorite football star. It is my biggest dream to be a professional football player.