新东方托福高分作文:对家长和孩子来说游戏都同等重要吗?

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In my opinion, games are as important for adults as they are for children. Being adults playing games helps them to relax, sharp their minds, make them more sportsmanship and improve their social skills. First, though playing games, adults can enjoy themselves and have fun. If you are a typist staying in offices facing lots of papers every day, enjoying some physically designed games helps you energy come back. If you are a deliveryman always on your way form day to night, trying crosswords puzzles is a good idea in your spare time. Actually games can do more than that. There are too much stress and responsibilities in our daily life, so participating in some role playing games to escape reality for a while is benefit for you be more responsible in real life. Secondly, for adults games helps keep their mind sharp. Poker, for example, always entailing bluffing, needs players to read social cues, watch the tiniest twitches in their opponents and figure out the “tell” when they are lying. Crossword puzzle need players integrate different cues together and stimulate your brain. Figuring out lying and integrating information are both vital to our daily life, and games provide us an available way to improve these skills. Third, games makes people more sportsmanship. “Good sport” involves follow the directions, summarize the experience in the process, accept losing without holding to the grudge. In the games, the rules are always carried out rigorously, so cheating at cards is not a wisdom choice. When you submit yourself to a game, you have to accept that you only can win occasionally for the lucky factor, and a lot of time you will lose. But if you want to do better, you need to be flexible , accept failure, learn from the mistakes and summarize the experience. All of these make you to be a good sport. Last but not the least, with the developing of computer technology, some computer games start to mimic real world. Players need to help each other, negotiate with each other and even betray each other from time to time, which provide a virtual plateau for people to communicate a lot. In my opinion it is good for some shy person. All in all, there are so much benefits for adults to playing games that there is no reason for adults to refuse games. Games are always helpful and enjoy them regardless of ages.