2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

作者句法知识扎实，但文中从句数量稍显不足；作者能较熟练、灵活地使用词汇，建议要多使用学术词汇；全文结构较为严谨。

Dear mike I'm very exciting when I heard the news that you will play a visit in my hometown. there are so many interesting place. My hometown chongqing also named Mountain city ,which is famous for Hot pot. Ciqikou Ancient Town is located in Chongqing city Shapingba District Jialing River, was built in the Song Dynasty,Where we can see the traces of history and feel very serenity.We can eat some the local snacks,such as xiaomian,which is very import in people's daily life. I believe that my foreign friend will have a good time in my hometown.