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过渡词很丰富，衔接词同时使用的恰到好处；熟练的使用了从句和复杂句；文中单词拼写做的很棒，再多积累些词汇就更好了；请注意分段。
If my foreign friends come to China I will take him to my hometown of Harbin My hometown Harbin is a beautiful city. If you come here you will find him very attractive First of all, this is called the Oriental small Paris so beautiful and cultural degree you can imagine Secondly he was also known as the city. The city is famous for ice and snow in winter if you come to the grandeur of the wind will find him This not only has beautiful scenery and it also delicious delicious. If you are here I believe you will love here
