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2013年12月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):有意义的生活

发布时间:2014-06-09 16:13浏览次数:9046
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Directions: For this party you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the remark "The greatest use of life is to spend it for something that will outlast it." You can give examples to illustrate your point and then explain what you will do to make your life more meaningful. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
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学术词汇能比较准确的使用,不过拼写错误稍多;熟练使用了一些长难句;缺少组织,上下文衔接欠流畅;请注意分段。

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"What is the meaningful life?"If you ask somebody to answer this question,different people wil hold different views. Some people point out that the lifestyle in which they force to hard work to afford the dependers is valuabe,while other people will uphold the the life what individual really enjoy is meaningful.In my opinion,however,keeping the healthy physical and mental situation,pursuing the personal goals constantly,and making the contribution to socioty perhaps can called the meaning life.

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