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雅思TASK1小作文模拟题:教育 Education

发布时间:2013-07-05 14:49浏览次数:1077
要求:

The table below gives information about the numbers of international students from four areas of the world who came to study at university level in a western country in 2000 and 2005.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

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采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅;如若适当增加一些从句的使用,文章会取得更好的成绩;单词拼写做的很好,但文中词汇表达贫乏。

用户练习作文:

There are 8 numbers of international studens from 4 areas of the world who came to study at university level in a western country in 2000 and 2005. In 2000, Chinese number was the greatest 35000,followed by indian 15000,the next one was Japanese,and the last one was 2000 from Brazil. In 2005, there were some changes of the orders and the numbers .Japan and Brazil changed their plain.Chianese number and Japanese number decreased, however,other two countries' number increased.

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