高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

文中单词拼写做的很棒，再多积累些词汇就更好了；但从句使用不熟练，注意平时练习中多积累；不能熟练使用过渡词，文章结构欠佳；请注意分段。

There were many trees in my hometown in the past.In the rivers,you could see many kinds of fishes swimming around.But the houses there were bad and the streets there were very narrow.People worked very hard.But they were still poor. Now,there are many building and shops around my town.All kinds of pretty cars runs in the street.But the environment becomes worse and worse because of the growing industry.There are fewer trees and the fish disappear.The must important thing is to control the pollution now.