2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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hello dear,i am very happy to interprise my hometown to you . my hometown is xiangyang which belongs to hubei province.xiangyang hsa many not only beautiful but also interesting places.let us visit and i will tell you . First, gulongzhong is the most famous place in xiangyang. Do you konw zhugeliang who is the most famous person in “三国演义” gulongzhong is the place where he was lived.in summer ,gulongzhong's