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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
上下文衔接稍显不流畅；采用了一些简单的从句；文中能较熟练地使用一定的学术词汇，但词汇表达多样性不高，拼写检查还需加强。
As the development of Internet,the life of people is more and more convinent.We can surf the net to work,shop,study and communnicate.In addition,people not only surf with computer,but also with cellphone. In China,the survey said that 90% student is prefer chat on internet to communnicate face-to-face.Though the science develop fast which make us superise,it also declare that the distance between people is becoming farther and farther.Consequently,I don't agree with the point that electronic communnication can replace face-to-face contact. Nowadays,it is more and more popular that the young always stay on the net.They begin to reduce the communnication with parents,friends face-to-face.Maybe they can find something make them happy or exciting in the virtual world.But we can realize clearly that we live in a actual world which has parents and friends. I appeal that everybody ought to put more time on the real communnication face-to-face.It can make the people that you talking about fee your faith and make the realationship more and more close. So ,put off your computer and cellphone ,talk to your people who next to you.
